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Morbid
A slice of the razor
And it’s all over
A twitch of the trigger
And it’s all over
A slip of the noose
And it’s all over
As morbid as these thoughts may be
These are the thoughts that got between you and me
You had your pain
That I didn’t get
And you had your ways of getting it “fixed”
As morbid as these thoughts may be
That’s what got between you and me
When I used to see your scars-
The ones on your legs and the ones on your arms,
I used to cringe and make believe that your pain would just leave
As morbid as these thoughts may be,
That’s what got between you and me
Swallow the pills
And it’s all over
Keep drinking
And it’s all over
Throw up again
And it’s all over
Starve your self any longer
And it’s all over
You used to call me
And tell me your sorrows
I would try my hardest to make you want for tomorrow
We had our good times
And our bad,
No matter what, I can’t forget those things you said
And as morbid as these thoughts may be
That’s what got between you and me
Now you’ve blocked me from your life
And in your eyes there is nothing I can do right
I’m so sick of playing your game-
Trying to get on your side by taking the blame
As morbid as these thoughts may be,
That’s what got between you and me
I hope one day you can respect my try’s to a part of your life
And be the friend you needed so
But still, I hope your pain doesn’t grow
For now, I say adieu
Because I cant do anymore to try and save you
As morbid as these thoughts may be,
I’m trying to let go of you and me
©2008-2009 ~muziek7
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Author's Comments

to the person this is about-- im sorry i would be having to write poems like these about you. too bad its true.

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:iconwhitefangkiba:
wow, that remines me about some stuff...
really great job though!:clap:

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who is howling with the wolves but isn't one of them, shouldn't be surprised if he gets bit...
:iconmuziek7:
thanks :) glad u liked it

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:iconwhitefangkiba:
np^^

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who is howling with the wolves but isn't one of them, shouldn't be surprised if he gets bit...
:iconcosmo-68:
O god this is awesome...I'm quite awestruck, our situation's alike ;p

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You saw me mourning my love for you and touched my hand...I knew you loved me then...
:iconmuziek7:
thanks ^^ heh idk if its a good thing that we share the same situation cause its quiet a sucky thing to go through, but its cool we can connect some way :D :cling:

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:iconfading-justice:
ooo man... there's hurt in this, but i like it sis, good job, it's sad tho

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:iconmuziek7:
yeah... thanks :)

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:iconbirthstone:
Very nice :D

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:iconmuziek7:
thanks ^^

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